The perpetual smile that adorned her face,
Was a fresh lease of life for everyone around!
The twinkle in her eyes and the chitter-chatter,
Always left us spell-bound.
And as she rests in peace this day,
Here's what she wanted to tell...
Please pass on the message of LOVE...
Let love be the one emotion that casts a spell !!
Kudos to my budding poet. It is indeed cute. It does convey the emotion of pain but your language is a bit too sweet to make the reader feel the gravity of the pain...Though keep the good work coming :-) Love definitely needs to keep flowing after all that is the only emotion that has been keeping this world spinning ...hehe
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